Feedback on my double page spread.
Marwa Salama:Is this what you have created Maneet? I can't believe it at all, no way can I believe it! It's really, really good. I just like how your magazine double page spread is laid out and it is very professional and before I had a problem with the size of your artist on the left as he was too small, but you have rectified it and now it's just really good!
Dawn Gallant:Bass Control, this is the name of your magazine. I like how you linked the logo for your magazine 'Bass C' on the double page spread. Before your space on the bottom right was empty, by putting in another image of your artist , using the angle of gaze I feel as if he is engaging with the audience, I really like it now.
Sana Khurshid:WOW, this is truly wicked, wow Maneet. I like it so, so, so much. I like your interview, it is very interesting, it isn't too long and snappy. It is written in a gripping way, so it's like you have to read it and with the colours to complement it, it isn't just amazing to look at it's wonderful to read as well. I also like your pull quotes, it is very engaging with me, I sat here on your double page spread for 15minutes, it literally is that good.
No comments:
Post a Comment